Saturday, November 14, 2015

Writng Outline...For English 101

Thesis statement: Contrary to some beliefs, pipelines benefit far more people than a bike paths, it will stimulate the economy and make a more attractive climate for energy companies and the community.


1.What a pipeline is.
      -furl transportation
      -the benefits

2, How it affects the community and environment
      -benefits for the community
      -better for the environment

3.Pipeline in the world
      -History
      -Politics

4.Important pipelines in the USA
      -Keystone
      -Alaska

5.Drawbacks
      -Accidents
      -Environment

6.Pipelines Vs. Bike path
      -Graph of users on bike path
      -Why the pipeline would make more sense 

7.Why the bike path would make an ideal place for the pipeline.
      -there is already a place for it
      -The bike path cuts from the coast to Discovery Bay 










So this my outline for my final essay, i know this is kinda of a controversial issue but it is only writing! so don't take any of what i say to personally or to your heart. I love hearing why people think that a pipeline is a bad thing (it helps in my writing) so let me hear all your comments in the comment section :) don't be afraid of offending me. 

i posted on Jeanette and Cathy blogs