Thesis statement: Contrary to some beliefs, pipelines benefit far more people than a bike paths, it will stimulate the economy and make a more attractive climate for energy companies and the community.
1.What a pipeline is.
-furl transportation
-the benefits
2, How it affects the community and environment
-benefits for the community
-better for the environment
3.Pipeline in the world
-History
-Politics
4.Important pipelines in the USA
-Keystone
-Alaska
5.Drawbacks
-Accidents
-Environment
6.Pipelines Vs. Bike path
-Graph of users on bike path
-Why the pipeline would make more sense
7.Why the bike path would make an ideal place for the pipeline.
-there is already a place for it
-The bike path cuts from the coast to Discovery Bay
So this my outline for my final essay, i know this is kinda of a controversial issue but it is only writing! so don't take any of what i say to personally or to your heart. I love hearing why people think that a pipeline is a bad thing (it helps in my writing) so let me hear all your comments in the comment section :) don't be afraid of offending me.
i posted on Jeanette and Cathy blogs
Interesting topic you chose! I am not quite sure where I stand on it but would love to read your essay and hear your thoughts. I think a lot of supporting evidence from other sources would help make your claim even stronger in the essay. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI think you have a pretty straight forward outline. I think the direction you're intending to go with your paper is interesting, indeed. I am curious, though, that maybe you should flip the #2 and #3. I think the background should come first before you go into how it will be effective to the community.
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